Wednesday, September 5, 2007

i am mystic.

mystery is a larger net, yea.
i cant catch all of the black and white leaves.
history is a dead man's bet, yea.
bottoms up gents.
take that
take you
make that
make you
it won't happen.
the translation is alien, still
translate again.
into mystery.

edit in the middle: more .5

evil looks like your face
G-d appears to be white, to you
and the apple doesn't just fall from the tree.
it tangos. a way.
G-d appears to be sky, blue, dark.
this sheep eye sees, leaves, bereaves
paradigm
this beady eye drinks strange for breakfast, fasting from commercials
spirit looks like the body's gone topsy turvy
see: me.
see: us.




..edit: more.

there is vibrant life, blood streaming down my shins.
my hair is long.
my skin with brown crusted paint beginning to run in the water.
the river water.
i'm heaving across a river colder than most,
carrying in my arms
a dream of a woman.
dark hair deep eyes.
weak in my arms.
weak in my gaze.
and i breathe her breath.

12 comments:

Jesse said...

who wrote dat?

haley said...

"and i breathe her breath."
Reminds of that part in the New World where they breathe each other's breath...I loved it.
Is this going to be a song? It would make a wonderful one, that's certain.

evan said...

that last part is my dream jesse edwards! haha.

guhhhhjagkjagataylorjg;ajgk;ag

Anonymous said...

Uh.
This is really good.
I'm calling you today?

Cal Waldorf said...

Would you mind, because I'd love to know, explaining what all that means?
colossalcollision@gmail.com

Jesse said...
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Anonymous said...

malone removes the things on this blog that are questioned because he doesn't know how to answer. has been listening to STRANGE, LAZY PEOPLE who live off others and LIE about everything they do.

Jesse said...

i will answer that.
i haven't seen anything questioned, only misunderstood; even better completely clueless. why don't you look the word mystic up? i delete the things you write because they have no place on my blogspot and i cannot reply to you because you are anonymous. why dont you sign into your own account, i realize you probably have one because you rapidly comment on mine? you're a coward, a person that has made judgements about me that are invalid. if anything, i know what a hard day's work is and i intended on spending my life working honestly and eating because of it. but you know what, i'm gonna leave your little comment on my site this time so that everyone who knows me for real can testify to your own misconceptions. you think i am strange because i am not worldly, nor am i aiming to add the wealth of the world; wealth that will not last forever.

why don't you waste someone else's time, like I said?

Anonymous said...

i am not criticizing you, malone. i am only saying not to listen to some people who pretend they live in poverty but do not. they are living very well off the labors of others but pretend to be poor when instead, they are just lazy, self-centered. you will find this to be true in time. they will have to answer. it would shock you if you knew!!!! take care and i think you really are a good person. at least i have always seen you as that....

Jesse said...

haha, i know you're not criticizing me, you're just bothering me. weird and strange are words that immature and insecure people live by, seeking to be removed from them as far as possible.


you've said nothing about the poor that i've seen valid. i know it is a fad to live in poverty, heck i know that true poverty isn't even physical. i know that american homeless people live on the streets to get money because they are lazy or drugged up, some of them are millonaires. shocked by that?


getting personal over theology is uncalled for, unnecessary. may you have peace in your heart about these things.

Anonymous said...

i have peace in my heart, jesse. will explain the next time i see you in person. take care and God Bless!

Jesse said...

blessings to you as well